Tuesday, April 8, 2014

Prompt #2


Once upon a time… there was an intelligent, creative, beautiful woman.  This woman was envied by all other women, and wanted by all of the men.  Considering it was back in the day, she had so much going for her, but her only aspirations were to marry a handsome man and live in a pretty house.  She had never believed herself to be capable of much more. 

Growing up, she was told to always stand by and look pretty.  No one ever took her seriously.  She had been laughed at so many times when she suggested plans of becoming anything more in the future.  Everyone underestimated her, and because of that, she began to underestimate herself.  She began to believe the criticism, and forget any other serious dream.

As the story goes on, she meets a very handsome man at a local club.  They began to see each other more and more often.  They always seemed to meet at night and have a night on the town with his friends and some of hers.  She was so caught up in the excitement, that when asked to be married after only a few months, she agreed.

She fancied her fiancé very much so.  He bought her pretty diamonds, expensive purses, and finally, an enchanting house to live in.  She was so consumed with his showering of gifts and parties, that she never took the time to time to fully get to know her husband to be.  All of friends congratulated her on finally reaching her happily ever after.  Yet, somehow, there was an emptiness she felt when the thought of being his “forever” crossed her mind. 

She came to the conclusion that maybe something was missing in her life.  Maybe there was something wrong with her marriage.  Maybe it wasn’t right.  Maybe she didn’t know him as well as she thought she did.  Maybe she wanted more out of life.  She had planned to sit him down, shortly after, to share these feeling that she couldn’t help but feel.

He arrived home after a long night of poker.  She had been waiting up for him.  He wreaked of alcohol and cigar smoke.  She began to worry that tonight wasn’t the night to tell him how she felt.  However, her compulsive mind kicked in and she shared how she felt regardless.  She shared how she feels that she needs to do something for herself to feel complete, and that they should take a break.  He was stunned, and he was angry.  In response to her proposal, he back handed her and continued to throw and kick her around until she was unconscious.

When she finally gained consciousness, she looked at herself in the mirror and began to panic.  She had to escape, but she didn’t know how.  Could she really survive on her own?  Could she really be independent for the first time in her life?  She felt that she had no choice.  She had to.

That day, she packed her bags and finally gained the courage to do things on her own.  She was free of men controlling her.  She decided to follow her dreams consisting of independence and capability.  She decided to begin her dream life all by herself.  She picked up an ax and began to get to work on building her dream home without needing the approval of a superior male figure.  She was strong and capable.


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